Independents,
the work that I have seen is coming on beautifully and thanks for the emails updating me - I have replied to all those I recieved, so if you haven't had a reply, can you please ensure you sent it to the right email address? Anyone who hasn't emailed me yet (as per the instructions in red on the other post) must do so this week.
I am feeling ever so slightly better so I am hopeful that I will be in on Monday. I am so impressed with how well you have got on without me - this independence is exactly what you need to succeed on the course (and throughout life!).
I thought people might be having a hard time with the commentaries so here's a good one I've seen so far - it is a work in progress, as they all are, so look at my comment below the piece to see how good work can be developed further. Don't forget to use your tips sheet as it asks the kind of questions you will want to answer. Callum's commentary is about 500 words so far and he will need to go upwards of 750 to get a chance to really cover the important aspects in detail.
So spend Friday's lesson time finishing and then re-drafting the pieces you have done so far, revise all the terminology we have done in lessons so far for an upcoming test and put some positive and/or helpful comments on people's work. Don't forget to keep working on your targets and doing the reading on my blog in your independent sudy time.
Email me if you have any worries/issues and email me anyway with a summary of how you are doing if you haven't already.
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