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Monday, 14 November 2016

Halloween story by Zach



The Haunted Dead (dictated by Zach, aged four years and five months)

First at the mill,  the ghost said, "How spooky is this mill? When the clock strikes 13, strange things happen and you don't know what will happen."

And when the dead rise, zombies say, "Brains!" and near the end/morning, go into the grave.

Next night day, the spooks come out and some are invisible - you just can't tell.

When you see the clock strike 13, you do you know what's going to happen last night and you do know not to go near that 13 o'clock. You know the roof might fall down.

In the morning, the creatures go to the grave. At the time they go, it's too violent, fighting in the morning at tomatoes. (They do tomato fighting in Spain.)

At least the book finishes at 6 o'clock. I can't wait. Because it's 016, it's nearly the end of the book.

At six in the morning and at six at night, don't stare at the mill. Don't stare at it too long. Don't stare at it too short. Don't stare at it at all.

The end.

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